As I walk into Scrooge's
living room the fire is low and the room is cold.Scrooge is sitting in the corner eating his gruel.He is terrified of my apperance.He doesn't believe what he is seeing.I could tell he is frightened.He ruined his pass and I came here to tell him to change his ways. Scrooge is a mean man,as I tell him that he will be visited by three ghost. The first ghost will take him to Christmas passed, the second ghost will take him to Christmas present and the third ghost will take him to his Christmas future. Scrooge is still surpised .He can not believe that his old friend visits him.I also tell Scrooge that if he does not change than he will go.
You should of spent more time on it but it okkkkk:):):)
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ReplyDeleteIts good but where will he go.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
ReplyDeleteIt wanders a bit but in the end it turns out nicely
ReplyDeletethere was a misspelled word but otherwise good job
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